Write a letter to HR department of a company requesting information about a interview that you attended but still waiting for results. In your letter:
Describe the position applied for
Why the interview went well
Why do you need the results.
Dear Ranuj,
I hope you are well. you will be glad to know that my employer has asked me to relocate to your city for around six months to handle the launch of company’s new project starting next month.
I would be shifting with my family, therefore, I need you help to find a suitable house for us somewhere in south of Delhi where my new office is located. It would be better to find apartments within a gated community because my parent would feel much safer within the housing complex and nearby few good kindergarten schools for kids.
It would be nice of you, if you could shortlist a few places which meet my requirements by this weekend, so I can finalize one of them during short trip to Delhi next week for an induction program. Furthermore, I am excited to finally get a chance to spend weekends together playing our favourite sport of graduation days.
I look forward to hear from you.
Yours truly,
Deepak Gupta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
Dear Ranuj, I hope you are well. you will be glad to know that my employer h...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...t of graduation days. I look forward to hear from you. Yours truly, Deepak Gupta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6369047619 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54716701597 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.732142857143 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1220182834 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.375 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123016271435 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583252190146 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317886043333 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786428737528 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023959042324 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.