Choosing a career path is probably one of the most important decisions we make during our lifetime. Personally speaking, young adults should have the freedom to choose their professions while they also need to take considerations about reality.
On the one hand, there is one main reason why youngsters should choose their jobs very carefully, and that they must weigh pros and cons before any irrational decision to be made. To be specific, it is undeniable that we are living in a world of consumerism, meaning we need to first and foremost make a living by ourselves to meet the basic survival preconditions. Modern people are usually faced with various kinds of spending such as housing, food and clothing and none of these could have been met if he or she doesn’t have a stable job to provide for these expenditures. On the contrary, if a person only has a hollow dream and no practical skills, it isn’t hard to imagine that he would have difficulties in finding a job, let alone lead a decent life.
On the other hand, I am more in favor of the argument that young people should choose their career path freely by following their hearts. In the first place, if people were given freedom to choose the professions they are so passionate about, they would feel more motivated, they would put extra effort in their working, and therefore they are more likely to succeed than their peers. For example, many Hollywood stars chose the acting career which they were so believe in and fought for and eventually made it possible. In addition, this freedom and passion people feel at work can make a huge difference to worker’s level of happiness and general quality of life. By contrast, I have seen people regretting so much as they gave up the chance to be whoever they want to be.
In conclusion, while I understand the necessity of youngsters being realistic, I am convinced that they should take on the path they are interested in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79881656805 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67693772591 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57100591716 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.8734496818 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.166666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311229120549 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113080902114 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840800831784 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185493478038 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540659366797 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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