In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
Nowadays, People travelling more than ever before. Most of people like fast and less travel transportation. In this essay argue about the both views of railways construction and improving public transportation and conclude with my opinion.
In one hand, People prefer fast and comfort travel for this they choose train. Because, it fast and very comfort and spent less travel between two cities. Most of the railway lines helps to transport the good like coals, grains, and other factories goods etc. Trains are the backbone for many factories for their transfer this goods. It is less expensive for travelling long distance. It is Eco-friendly transportation. When, compare with other public transportation.
In other hand, I believe improving is most important than construction of railways line. Because, it helps the population of inner city travelers. This improvement of public transportation helps to lays good quality and enlarge size of the roads. This action helps to reduce the traffic blocks and to minimize the accident occurs. The government should spent money in transport elements like buses. This result helps to reduce people of usage of their own vehicle and they try to use of public transport, this leads to minimize the traffic and accidents occurs. During peak hours and special occasion the traffic is at highest and also difficult to control it government should improve the roads by constructing flyovers, proper allocating traffic police, and maintaining the traffic signals.
To conclude, with my opinion that both the rail and public roads very important. The Government should contribute evenly based up on the level of transportation it tends to level of states or country. Better transportation helps to produce better world with faster development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...eople travelling more than ever before. Most of people like fast and less travel transportatio...
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Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to train'
Suggestion: to train
...and comfort travel for this they choose train. Because, it fast and very comfort and ...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e for many factories for their transfer this goods. It is less expensive for travell...
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Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nce. It is Eco-friendly transportation. When, compare with other public transportati...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ant than construction of railways line. Because, it helps the population of inner city ...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'lay'.
Suggestion: lay
...ement of public transportation helps to lays good quality and enlarge size of the ro...
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Line 7, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e better world with faster development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37366548043 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86357703825 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526690391459 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4212505452 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.05 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.85 7.06120827912 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268113157875 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791737665843 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596421642529 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151944074735 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501747885443 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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