You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to beshared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Recently new technology change all of the world. but between these technologies, internet play an important role. In this century you can learn a lot of thing by the internet and people can share their information in there. so this invention help human to share their information with out concerning about that. Hence these issue has advantage and disadvantage which is dangerous some times and we should care about that.
sharing data is an important problem and we can't find a rule about that. there fore some people think some data is not secret and other one believe that this information is important. however a lot of company by establishing some website and software try to share information between people but, besides of their duty, they spy about life and behavior of people. they collect big data and analyse that and decide to what to do or what not to do for our world and society. some times they sell their information to the government and politician use these data to control their people or other countries people. Also some hackers use other people information and try to take money instead of their information.
however, big data and sharing information can help to improve technology and science faster and better than before. some time two or more people around the world search about some thing, so if they share their information they can solve the problem and reach to their goals.
in conclusion this issue has both side and we can't give this positive or negative score. we should use this facility in the correct way and make our life better.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-06-18 | Mohammadjavad | 56 | view |
| 2018-07-01 | n0air9x9 | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
Recently new technology change all of the world. but between these technologies, ...
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Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...new technology change all of the world. but between these technologies, internet pl...
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of things'.
Suggestion: a lot of things
...ant role. In this century you can learn a lot of thing by the internet and people can share th...
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Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...e can share their information in there. so this invention help human to share thei...
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Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...n help human to share their information with out concerning about that. Hence these issu...
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Line 1, column 313, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...rmation with out concerning about that. Hence these issue has advantage and disadvant...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sharing
...e times and we should care about that. sharing data is an important problem and we can...
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Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ing data is an important problem and we cant find a rule about that. there fore some...
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Line 2, column 73, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...lem and we cant find a rule about that. there fore some people think some data is not...
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Line 2, column 73, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: therefore
...lem and we cant find a rule about that. there fore some people think some data is not secr...
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Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...eve that this information is important. however a lot of company by establishing some w...
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Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...eve that this information is important. however a lot of company by establishing some w...
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Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... spy about life and behavior of people. they collect big data and analyse that and d...
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Line 2, column 472, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...at not to do for our world and society. some times they sell their information to th...
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Line 2, column 610, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...their people or other countries people. Also some hackers use other people informati...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... money instead of their information. however, big data and sharing information can h...
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Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
... science faster and better than before. some time two or more people around the worl...
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Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...re people around the world search about some thing, so if they share their information the...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... the problem and reach to their goals. in conclusion this issue has both side and...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...clusion this issue has both side and we cant give this positive or negative score. w...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...t give this positive or negative score. we should use this facility in the correct...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82287822878 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46270088125 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509225092251 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7300393649 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289134797983 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103934169111 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666233659917 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173926861545 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661547898228 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.