Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child’s success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although the children stay with the classmates for the whole time but it doesn't mean they are more important on the child's success than the parents.Personally,I disagree with the idea that the classmates is the most important factor of the child's success.
From the one side,the parents know about their children more than anyone and they know what is the best for them.From the other side,they have the experiences on a lot of matters so they can help their children solve the problems more easily and correct their mistake.Moreover,they know all about the bad habits of the children so they can help them remove it.Finally,they will never deceive the children and stay with them in order to help them whenever they need because they are everything the parents have.
Nevertheless,the classmates can also affect to the children a little bit.In my opinion,they have some similarities such as interest,thought,and they generally are the students so they can exchange more easily than the children. However,they definitely don't have more experiences than the parents so they can 't give you the best direction when you need.In summary,I believe the parents have an enormous effect on the child's success.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child’s success in school. 56
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child’s success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, in summary, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18974358974 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24130962729 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.34580455 49.4020404114 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 253.0 106.682146367 237% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.75 20.7667163134 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.75 7.06120827912 322% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153934436255 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136845906359 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991234398343 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154355936138 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101115738859 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.4 13.0946893788 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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