Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal.
Some people, however, think that other types of progress are actually important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Strong economy and well managed infrastructure are the need of today's world, so many governments are focused and formulate their policy to boost the national economy. However, a section of people believes that other progress such as education, culture are more important than economic development. I accord with the notion of economic development, as other types of developments are inter linked.
To embark on, world has seen that prosperous nations have progressed in all respects, and their government emphasis more on economic development of the country. As wealth is required to improve any sector of a state, so economic boost is the most important criteria for every government. For instance, to have a good education system, a nation needs fine universities, colleges and schools, which actually needs money. Moreover, health of the nations, cultural enhancement and expansion are possible if nation is financially strong to invest in these sectors.
However, a few people aruge that investment for development in culture, in health etc. are more important than investment in infrastructure and business. They believe if government put less effort in saving their culture, in heath of their people, entire community will die one day due to the influence of other culture. But, to save any culture, to improve health etc., government needs money in their disposal, which is possible only if economic condition is stable.
To sum up, financial strength of a nation is the base of all sorts of development. Therefore, economic development is given as first initiative by any well developed country as all other developments are correlated with each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 384, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'interred'.
Suggestion: interred
...ent, as other types of developments are inter linked. To embark on, world has seen t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33079847909 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96087632134 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570342205323 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1358064964 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217357477005 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771400118626 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045099944938 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129582259212 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544800121668 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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