The increase in tourism is causing environmental problems. What problems has tourism brought to the environment? What can be done to solve these problems?
There are number of reason that creates environmental issues due to escalation of increasing tourism. While, I believe that it has many ways to fill the gap and resolve these issues.
In today's world, it can be seen that people's tendency towards the tourism has been increased as compare to last couple of decades that eventually is far beneficial for the country in the term of economy alongside environment. but, escalation of tourism has also many adverse consequences which creates many problems for environment and citizens for instance, increasing garbage quantity that actually ruin green environment, shortage of trees owing to enlargement of new building and parks, thorough garbage on sea water which devastate the ocean animals and many others.
Furthermore, in order to streamline the situation of stated above issues is to be considered by the government that actually plays most significant role among the country. Moreover, government needs to implement sanction on those things which are harmful for the environment for example, plastic bags, bottles and others. Many adepts asset that government should install solid waste treatment plant to destroy wastages as well as prosperity of the country.
To sum up, for the sake of the country government should take stern steps for decreasing the problem of environment. Along with this, implement those machineries which is need for the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... term of economy alongside environment. but, escalation of tourism has also many ad...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adepts'' or 'adept's'?
Suggestion: adepts'; adept's
... plastic bags, bottles and others. Many adepts asset that government should install so...
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Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ries which is need for the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 3.97073170732 479% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40990990991 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83661134657 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612612612613 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.9779290542 43.030603864 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.444444444 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5555555556 5.23603664747 240% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17823268045 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071540173819 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571601399241 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109120729004 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588214751967 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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