You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements.
Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter,
explain what you like about the cafeteria
say what is wrong with it
suggest how it could be improved
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is David Watson and I am pursing post-graduation course at HL College. I am writing this letter to suggest some alterations which could be made at the college cafeteria.
Visiting the cafeteria during lunch hours is part of daily schedule. Cafeteria is structured so well that it can accommodate more than 60 people. There are two things I like about the cafeteria.
First is the moveable furniture. The tables and chairs is moved at the refuge area behind the cafeteria post meal hours; making the room for in-door games activities like carom, table tennis etc.
The second thing I like is the idea of playing soft music all the time in the cafeteria. It helps reducing the stress level.
The thing which can be improvised is the utilization of the empty space near the entrance of the Cafeteria. Since you are aware that there has been too much of waiting period during lunch hours
lot of students needs to wait for more than 20 minutes to get the table. However if the alterations are made to the structure near the entrance, the space can be enlarged. This is reduce the
waiting time to some extent.
I Hope you take my suggestion into consideration and look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to reduce' or 'reduce'.
Suggestion: to reduce; reduce
...all the time in the cafeteria. It helps reducing the stress level. The thing which ca...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 74, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... more than 20 minutes to get the table. However if the alterations are made to the stru...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 181, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...nce, the space can be enlarged. This is reduce the waiting time to some extent. I...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pace can be enlarged. This is reduce the waiting time to some extent. I Hope y...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78538812785 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54861613726 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62100456621 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6188790261 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8666666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205246146989 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596962358152 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569390105568 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759184097106 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439115526133 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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