Dear Mrs Annie,
I am Chen from the Reinsurance Department. I am writing this letter to nominate for the Employee of the Year Award.
This year, I think that the best candidate for the award should give to Mr John Chen, who works in the Underwriting Department. I had a chance to work with him in the FIRST project, which gain an outstanding success in terms of profit as well as brand identity. As you know, this project has been planned for a long time, however, it just has been implemented recently and achieved great attainments in a short time. This would not have been done without the considerable efforts of Mr John and his team. From a teamwork perspective, he is an inspiring leader who always guides his team members to the right path of the topics whenever they seem to get lost. Moreover, he has a strong commitment to his duty so he never misses his deadlines, as well as the ability to delegate specific task to a right person so the project is sure to process smoothly. His colleagues and customers may never feel stressful working with him due to his sense of humor, positive attitude and the ability to inspire and encourage people around him.
Above all, what makes him stand out and worthy among those nominated for the award this year is the achievement he got in FIRST project. According to the mid-year report, as of 31th May 2019, the revenue from this project has reached one billion VND, accounting for 70% of the total revenue in property insurance sector, bringing more than 2 new million users. This is a record of achievement in the pass three years and he deserves a reward for all his efforts.
This is my personal thought and I would be thankful if you take time to consider my suggestion.
Thanks and Best Regards,
Lyn Tran
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Thanks and Best Regards, Lyn Tran
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, i think, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 937.175257732 156% => OK
No of words: 316.0 206.0 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62025316456 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54341410227 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 127.690721649 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601265822785 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 290.88556701 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1618081409 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.285714286 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232588228326 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825177656719 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822116757229 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112056094496 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674041028042 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 41.2886597938 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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