Write a letter to the hotel manager to make arrangements for hosting a party for one of your friends In your letter tell the manager about the reason for the party explain what requirements you have ask about the availability of facilities and t

Dear sir,

I am a loyal patron of your 'Greenyard Restaurant And Party Center' and I am writing to book your ballroom in advance on the occasion of my best friend's 5th anniversary. Actually, my confidence in the foods and services of your enterprise influence me to contact with you.

11th July 2019 is the fifth marriage anniversary of my best friend, Jams and he wants to celebrate this occasion with great enthusiasm and joy. To fulfill his desire he requested me to contact you on behalf of him as I have a decent relationship and communication with you.

To make the arrangement successful my friend has some prerequisite albeit he is ready to pay extra for that. Firstly, we need to run the party till 2 am although your restaurant's regular working hour ends at 12 am. Secondly, we need a full-fledged high definition music system as a local band is likely to perform on that program. And last but not least, we expect a scrumptious Chinese food menu with a decadent multi-layered fruit cake with a screen-printed couple photo. A total of 70 adults with 10 kids are expected to attend on that very day and we want an individual sitting arrangement with a welcome drink during each entry.

Please let me know the feasibility of the above-mentioned requirements in details.

Your's faithfully

A T M Jakir Alam

Votes
Average: 9.6 (3 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78260869565 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01315326985 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669565217391 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.4167947441 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132049574423 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499941074813 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418945785618 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680168989788 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416059956699 0.0580467560999 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.