You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working at its head office in another country.
Dear Mr. Harrison,
I am writing to let you know about my intentions to work at the main office for the duration of six months. I saw a vacancy for the post of Project Manager in the company's monthly magazine and this will be a great relief to me because, coincidentally, I was given a provisional admission to do certification in Project management at the Rolando University of Spain and was actually thinking of deferring the admission before, but now, this is a perfect opportunity for me to work and also attend my course. I have a good command of Spanish language so language barrier will no be an issue as I understand that they only speak Spanish at the central office.
However, Miss Jane has agreed to add my job to her own as we actually job-share , and I will also be available online , should she need any assistance from me.
Kindly, recommend me for this post because I need your approval before I could be considered and I am very sure the training will be of immense advantage to the company.
Yours sincerely,
Barry White
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 508, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r me to work and also attend my course. I have a good command of Spanish language...
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Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...anish language so language barrier will no be an issue as I understand that they o...
^^
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... job to her own as we actually job-share , and I will also be available online , s...
^^
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re , and I will also be available online , should she need any assistance from me....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, incidentally, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63101604278 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79184645916 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.688376385 44.8134815571 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.333333333 76.5299724578 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 16.8248392259 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 4.34317383033 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153711908494 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697401527058 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769279420091 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803083261516 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823699611771 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 8.37731958763 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.