Nowadays, holidays for people are become a relaxing days.But behind every holiday, there is a deeper meaning and is to celebrate a unique action and event or event happened in our history.If I had chance to invent the holiday,it would be "environment day". I believe that many countries already have this day. It would celebrate in several steps for 3 days.
First of all, each day, people around the world would be gathered in small groups. The purpose of this action is that one is more likely to appreciate the value of a holiday when actively participates in its occurrence. The environment day help people to relax, to slow down the pace of their life. Life is very stressful these days. People are competing for a better job, companies and countries are competing for a market and business. So, this day will help people to enjoy the moment of their life, to leave their troubles behind and appreciate all they have. people should go to a restaurant or to a movie, but they will go to the nearest park and celebrate it by walking, jogging, line-skating or bicycling. Also, this will be a day of healthy food, fresh squeezed juice and a lot of smiling faces. This day will inspire people with energy for the rest of the month.
Secondly, people will be called to use their car as less as possible, In order to prevent air pollution and to keep the air fresh. Every car has a large impact on the environment. People often drive their car to the nearest store to buy food when can spend 5 minutes more and get their by foot or bicycle. To keep air fresh people should promote the electronics vehicle which are free from toxic gas and noisy sounds. In addition to this,People should try to use public transport so that pollution and traffic problem can reduce.
Last but not least, in the environment days every person should plant at least one tree. Because there are many benefits of the tree.It help purify the air and provide food for the living things. Many of the living are got extinct because of the proper shelter.Tree will also help in out to provide the shelter of the birds and animals. To make the effective and valuable, all of these proposals would be submitted in every country's government. Hence, a lot of people will be awarded for their efforts, thus becoming more willing to try harder next year. On the other hand, other groups would not give their best next time. Thus, people would form bonds of friendship with each other, and very beneficial measure would have been taken by every government for the sake of the environment, simultaneously.
In summary, I strongly believe my holiday would make people and other living species friendlier, healthier and happier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, at least, in addition, in summary, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2247.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76059322034 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54752919907 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514830508475 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4147656327 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.88 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.88 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188339928258 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055017567599 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497718419187 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128565893655 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424046442196 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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