Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education is becoming very expensive nowadays and there is a debate among people whether government should provide completely free education or not. I strongly believe that education should be available to everyone for free of cost.

Some will advocate that tertiary education has to continue as a paid one. They argue that students who are all attending universities usually end up getting high paid jobs and it is ok to payback for the quality education.
Also, if majority of the people can able to afford higher education it will be difficult to find workforce for manual jobs, which will affect the economy. Also,

There is also another perspective for this issue, such as education is also basic right for all the citizen and government should make sure that there is no one left behind because of their financial status.
It is hard to justify that young children cannot pursue higher education just because their parents are not rich enough to afford. Neighborhoods with less education opportunities always end up with high crime rates.
Education will bring more socio-economic prosper.

After considering both sides of the arguments, I completely agree that education should be available to all in spite of race, religion, gender, and economy status. It will make the education system fair and provide equal opportunities to all. Education is the major stepping stone to overcome any hurdles one might face in their life and government has responsibility to provide that to all. After all, an educated population is the biggest asset of any nation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, after all, as to, such as, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16078431373 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72743899858 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3337639228 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.230769231 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122673698915 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485454648363 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495954614063 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623565924271 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507042782472 0.056905535591 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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