The reading states that the hydro power dams are unbelievable construction that has variety of benefits and provide three reasons for support. However, the professor explains that we need more research and development for construction of dams and refutes each of author's reasons.
Firstly, the reading states that dams has no negative effect on environment. While the professor claims that construction of dams need to make path in water, that cause number of moving fish to die. He adds that after construction is done the water flows very slow which affect the reproduction of fish.
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