Dear Sam,
I am feeling delighted to share you that I got my first achievement in my personal life.
As you are aware that, I was busy at construction site from last six months and not in a position to talk with you. Now, I want to disclose this suspense that it was my home in sector 32 which is now ready for getting in. Therefor, we have decided to cut the ribbon on next Saturday morning at 11:00 AM.
It was my dream to build my own house to secure my family future and also for rental income which provide me financially support, apart from financial support it reduces my mental pressure. Apparently, it is not a easy decision to leave your neighbourhood as you and your family always support us in every ups and downs and were become like family.
You all are invited on this special eve and we shall be lucky to have your presence in our precious moments.
Hope you will you will visit us and make this a lovable memory.
Your's truly
Charlie
- Writing task 1 (a letter)You’re moving out of your rental apartment. Write a letter to your neighbour to say goodbye. In your letter say– When and where do you move?– Why do you move out?– How do you feel about it? 73
- Some people think that men and women have good expertise only in particular fields This means men are better at doing certain jobs and women are better at doing some other jobs Do you agree or disagree 78
- You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:.Ask for some time off to complete a qualification..Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off..Say 78
- You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say– When did it happen?– Describe the problem.– Suggest what could be done about it. 56
- You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :Give detail of the job Explain why it is important to you Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... mental pressure. Apparently, it is not a easy decision to leave your neighbourho...
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Line 11, column 6, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'you will'.
Suggestion: you will
...esence in our precious moments. Hope you will you will visit us and make this a lovable memory...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...isit us and make this a lovable memory. Yours truly Charlie
^^^^^
Line 15, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...able memory. Yours truly Charlie
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, if, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4469273743 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35178942872 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675977653631 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2096670983 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4444444444 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173041099229 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802561168862 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574176741144 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979220288624 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241175913515 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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