Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
It has been observed that completion of first punishment makes people become more dangerous criminals rather than improving themselves. The reasons behind this alarming situation are lack of counseling facilities and accompanying with professional criminals in the jail. By providing psychological sessions to the new offenders and keeping them separate from other criminals can eradicate the problem.
Firstly, prisoners are not provided with psychological counseling, so they never realize their mistake that had led them to the jail. As a result, they ignore the harm inflicted by them to others and try to go to the next level of crime. It makes them more dangerous offenders when they complete imprisonment.
Secondly, new felons are kept with professional offenders and gangsters, they learn new tricks of serious crimes leading them to more violent activities. After finishing their tenure in the jail, they become severe threat to the society.
On brighter side, these problems can be solved if government pays heed to some solutions. First of all, professional psychologists should be hired to analyse the behavior of new offenders and treat them accordingly. Therapists should explain that they had been sent to the jail to make them productive citizens.
Similarly, Jailers should assign separate cells to new and less harmful criminals. This segregation from dangerous felons would let them stay away from trying new evil tricks, allowing them to groom into improved members of the society.
In conclusion, inadequate psychological assistance and companionship with dangerous criminals are worsening the actions of people who complete their sentence for the first time. Professional mind therapy and isolation from severe offenders can bring totally opposite results. In this way, our society would produce more useful citizens in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58450704225 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89057700632 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.038031107 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158744987393 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555819227381 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363575120266 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863590299837 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338618082851 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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