A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives

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A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives

Submitted by Helena1 on Sun, 06/23/2019 - 15:41

Technology is a field which is making
progress each day . Our lives changing together with technology. Nowdays, people can't imagine a single day without mobile phones or computer devices. With technology our lives became easier.
We must not deny apart from those positive, there is also plenty of negative sides that technology brings. But let's point out some positive ones first. The invention of technology have a significant point. In medicine, technology can help to discover diagnosis and help professionals to treat those in needs. Also , technology plays a big role in sales areas and companies by helping them to do job faster and saving them money. Apart from this, technology is the great way for those far away from families to communicate on daily basis and feel closer to their homes. Technology has made a humungus improvement in tourism. People planning holidays can easily get all informations and make their booking on their phone or computer.
On the other hand, technology have many disadvantages. In some areas people been replaced with machines. For instance, banks no longer need to have a actual person working on counter as there is a machine that is going to do the same job as human would. Technology is slowly reducing human impact on the world. Nowdays, society have a problem with overweight people and many are asking themselves why? It is a simple answer behind this question. People no longer need to walk to the high street or shopping malls to get theirs food or clothes, everything is done online. There is also a big negative impact of technology on toddlers. Children's spending most of their time playing computer games rather than enjoying a nature or playing a football in park.
To summarise, technology plays a major role in our lives and as much as it have positive sides, those negative sides weight more.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hich is making progress each day . Our lives changing together with techno...
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...gether with technology. Nowdays, people cant imagine a single day without mobile pho...
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...h technology our lives became easier. We must not deny apart from those positi...
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...must not deny apart from those positive, there is also plenty of negative sides t...
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...ative sides that technology brings. But lets point out some positive ones first. The...
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...fessionals to treat those in needs. Also , technology plays a big role in sales ar...
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... and saving them money. Apart from this, technology is the great way for those fa...
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...r booking on their phone or computer. On the other hand, technology have many ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, apart from, for instance, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95819935691 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63299882025 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588424437299 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2222283778 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0909090909 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1363636364 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13636363636 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33054137798 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888860943947 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684213187357 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180993397064 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063371814035 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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