Bar chart- number of visitors in three different London museums
The provided bar chart gives the number of the visitors to the three different London Museums between year 2007 and 2012. There is an obvious difference in visiting museums through those years.
National Gallery in 2007 had above five million visitors. Number of visitors was increasing each year and reached the highest point of even more than fifteen million visitors per year in 2012. The given information shows that in 2007 and 2008, most popular places to visit were Victoria and Albert museum. Amount of times those two museums were visited remained the same in 2007 and 2008, when two museums were also the most visited with approximately 14 million visitors. That number significantly decreased in 2010 by nearly half.
As observed British museum reached the highest point in 2012, but in 2008 and 2009 had a lowest number of visitors and remained same in those two years.
To summarise, National Gallery is on the first place, followed by British museum. Therefore , National Gallery is the most popular among London museums.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0701754386 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38087606757 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 176.041082164 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9211023047 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346856802283 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138979596432 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170783363407 0.0667982634062 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236547084227 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.197113370094 0.056905535591 346% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.