If racism and xenophobia are attitudes that we are taught not born with, then the problems that come from than can be resolved.
The hatred towards foreign people among some of the nations have become the eternal trend thought out the people of different cultures, despite the encouragement of equality by governments and some of the societies too.
The civilisation of the modern era may have reached the peaks of success but at the same time seemed to be hitting the rock bottom. The flow of thoughts from people o people have enriched the notion of watered for refuse, have raised the global issues of racism and xenophobia. Regardless of well educated and well developed civilians the hatred towards outsides is spreading on a drastic level.
However, the question of origin of this discrimination remain same that if this hatred have been taught to people or it's in the genes. From scientific point of view, the born does not bring any psychological characteristics with him, instead he is being shaped by the people and the environment around him, which points out the inevitable fact that the emergence of this phenomena has nothing to do with the early life of the human.
On the other side, the well known trend of spreading rumours and the customary practices of a particular nation which have been everlasting, which comprises these controversies and nagativvity are eventually evading every civilian's mind essential factor to be cut down seems to be the expansion of the notions of racism and xenophobia.
From my belief, a developed nation is all about having developed people and if some how the existence of misconceptions about foreign people would be eliminated wisely, for which we would have to persuade the society in a right way, then we would be able to settle this issue and knock down racism and xenophobia.
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- The hatred towards foreign people among some of the nations have become the external trend thought out the people of different cultures, despite the encouragement of equality by governments and some of the societies too. 56
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- If racism and xenophobia are attitudes that we are taught not born with, then the problems that come from than can be resolved. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...The hatred towards foreign people among some of the nations have become the eternal trend t...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ragement of equality by governments and some of the societies too. The civilisation of ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e seemed to be hitting the rock bottom. The flow of thoughts from people o people h...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... bring any psychological characteristics with him, instead he is being shaped by ...
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: the surrounding environment
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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...e inevitable fact that the emergence of this phenomena has nothing to do with the ea...
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Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: somehow
...ll about having developed people and if some how the existence of misconceptions about ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ped people and if some how the existence of misconceptions about foreign people w...
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Line 9, column 219, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0034965035 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77475476803 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.9766501732 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.875 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.75 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167571742585 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656526479012 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539876407511 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875901509492 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518327084263 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.