The population of most cities is growing as people move to cities to find work and new opportunities. What problem does over population in cities cause? How can these problems be solved?
Nations worldwide are dealing with the burning issue of overpopulation in megacities. This will discuss problems caused by the migration of people from rural to urban areas as well as possible solutions for them.
To begin with, there are two major problems that have been faced by overcrowded cities. First and foremost, vehicular pollution is closely related to modern cities. Due to increase in population, demand for cars also increases, which deteriorate health besides the environment in a way that vehicles produced the carbon monoxide. hence, the increase in the number of cars also pollutes the air. For example, a study conducted by Queen's land University concluded that 40% of the lungs related disease caused by carbon monoxide produced by automobiles.
Secondly, in overpopulated cities slam living is also a major concern, various migrants from rural areas were seen living below the par standard of living. Owing to the fact that the number of average people increases, the government find it strenuous to provide clean water and sanity. The clear example of this can be the recent survey conducted by Education Today concluded that countries, where people were evenly distributed, leads a stable life as compared to those where the population is not properly distributed. Hence, it is evident in megacities increase in population is not less than a challenge.
Although, numerous problems associated with overpopulation in cities, these problems are not surmountable. Firstly, air pollution can be controlled by choosing eco-friendly transportation system in suburb areas. Hence, reducing the demand for cars as well as air pollution. Secondly, the government should restrain manufacturing plants to rural areas. This will prosper the rural areas in a way that new opportunities will be available for the locals. Having jobs people almost dropped the idea of migrating toward cities. For example, the government of Pakistan restricts Engro Fertilizer manufacturing plant to Gawader which not only provide jobs to the locals but also encourage them to stay in the Gawader rather than moving to other cities.
In conclusion, in most countries, overpopulation needs to be severely dealt with by managing the transit system besides creating more job opportunities. In the future, the government should focus on long term projects to flourish the rural areas.
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.to what extent do you agree with this view? 73
- The population of most cities is growing as people move to cities to find work and new opportunities. What problem does over population in cities cause? How can these problems be solved? 78
- Some people say that music is a good way to bring people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree 71
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- Some people think that government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
... vehicles produced the carbon monoxide. hence, the increase in the number of cars als...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42318059299 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94029189693 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544474393531 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3386749922 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.55 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162253581133 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398178836188 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394100122601 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794998458346 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377156703571 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.