The bar chart gives information about the percentage of workers in different sectors of employment in three countries at different stages of economic development
The level of employees in agricultural, industrial and service sector in three economically different countries is compared in the diagram. Overall, India has the largest figure for agriculture, while service plays an important role in Japan’s workforce.
Regarding India, agricultural sector accounts for more than half of the labor force, in contrast, Jpan makes up just a marginal minority of this country’s level of workers. In terms of Industry, Japan witnesses the largest slice of workers with one-third of people occupied in this field, almost three times as many as the percentage of industrial laborers in India. Likewise, there are a significant number of people working in service in Japan, possessing an overwhelming majority of the workforce, twice as many as that figure in India.
Brazil remains to have the second highest percentage in all three sectors, with 50% of the workforce are service employees, while the two other sectors share the same figure of about 25%
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- The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. 73
- The bar chart gives information about the percentage of workers in different sectors of employment in three countries at different stages of economic development 70
- The bar chart gives information about the percentage of workers in different sectors of employment in three countries at different stages of economic development 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, regarding, second, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35668789809 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95839131824 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636942675159 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.480600866 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.166666667 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156197470297 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081932326752 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08611927536 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110383474143 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327031800773 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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