Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse.
What is your opinion?
Support your point of view with relevant examples.
climate change has become a topic of debate. it is believed that oil, gas and coal are vital for numerous industries, not using them will cause economic collapse. In my opinion, I find this view completely justifiable.
it is true that the last couple of decades, climate change is a massive environmental problem. Due to that concern, many believe that instead of burning fossil fuels from oil, gas and coal, human should replace it with other sources of energy such as wind and solar power. Despite that burning fossil fuels may badly damaged the environment, it cannot easily be replaced by alternative energy. On major reason is the quantity of wind and solar were insufficient for our needs. The electricity that we used everyday is principally from burning fossil fuels. For examples, cars, trains can run by using oil. Thus, without this kind of energy, human will not have adequate power to fulfil our needs.
Another reason is our economy will suffer from using only wind and solar power. The alternative resources are expensive as it require enormous advance technology involve. As the result, the government have to spend towering cost on the energy consumption. Hence, an inevitable result occurs which is the collapse of the economy. So a vital solution could be using both fossil fuels and alternative energy resources to benefit the economy and reduce climate change
In conclusion, after discussing the aforementioned view on using fossil fuels in number of industries, I believed that it is significant to our daily life and cannot be discard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Climate
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...nd this view completely justifiable. it is true that the last couple of decades...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...our needs. The electricity that we used everyday is principally from burning fossil fuel...
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Message: Did you mean 'requires'?
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...ternative resources are expensive as it require enormous advance technology involve. As...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1007751938 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67460958761 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573643410853 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.8325706896 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369801969672 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106000884351 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888463133637 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182716544736 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11985361147 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.