The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
There are many threats involving the environment around us and, before taking any directions, it is crucial to weigh and see who plays the most important role for saving the environment.
First of all, governments actions are extremelly essential for it. They endorse laws that ban people from razing the nature. In Brazil, for example, there have been created many laws to protect the amazon forest in the past and now it seems that there are no more drawbacks involving deforestation in such area.
Morever, companies play important role in combating air pollution. For instance, we can see everyday the disturbances of air quality made by cars, buses, and oil burned. By developing electric cars, industries would certainly eliminate the necessity of fuel.
However, it is each person who plays the biggest part in helping saving the environment. It comes from them to make recycling and stop cuting trees. Besides not using cars, they ought to use bicycle for locomotions instead.
Finally, everyone has a little function when helping to save the nature, but each individual is the most responsible for the environment when looking in the big picture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...air pollution. For instance, we can see everyday the disturbances of air quality made by...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 66, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to save' or 'save'.
Suggestion: to save; save
...n who plays the biggest part in helping saving the environment. It comes from them to ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, however, look, so, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 1207.87684729 80% => OK
No of words: 189.0 242.827586207 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13756613757 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71024483391 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 379.143842365 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8133567956 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2727272727 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133757968339 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422685768112 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436130056734 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072978692773 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389529189237 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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