Write a letter to apply for a part time job in a new international company, you have heard about the position from someone in your neighbourhood
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with reference to job vacancies in your esteemed Company. It has got to my notice that your Organisation is hiring part time Cashier for your retail stores chain.
I have always dreamt of working with some International Company. When I heard about the vacancies from the neighbourhood, I started visualising myself to work with the Company. Although, I am working full time as a cashier in a local Pharmaceutical store I would be honoured to serve your Organisation by working on weekends.
I have been working as a cashier since 7 years now. I started my working journey from being a helper to the Cashier at Local retail store. After learning everything about the cashier role, I decided to work as an Independent cashier. At the same time position for the cashier was vacant at the pharmaceutical store and I am working there ever since. I am very good at handling and managing cash. To add it, I have been promoted as a Head cashier a month back.
Considering my skills and past experience I consider myself as a best fit for that position.
I am pleased to enclose my resume along with this letter for your kind perusal.
Hoping for a Positive response and waiting for your reply!
Yours faithfully
Tony Stark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...notice that your Organisation is hiring part time Cashier for your retail stores chain. ...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ith the Company. Although, I am working full time as a cashier in a local Pharmaceutical ...
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Line 8, column 27, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
... month back. Considering my skills and past experience I consider myself as a best fit for tha...
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Line 8, column 64, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...nd past experience I consider myself as a best fit for that position. I am pleas...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77272727273 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79751956248 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559090909091 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3509477814 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269366349199 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949770761512 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672270026709 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144789209937 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793071681072 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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