Recent incursions by deep-sea fishermen into the habitat of the Madagascan shrimp have led to a significant reduction in the species population. With the breeding season fast approaching, the number of shrimp should soon begin to increase. Nonetheless, the population should not return to the levels before the fishing boats arrived. Because this trend is expected to continue over the next several years, the Madagascan shrimp will quickly become an endangered species.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The argument states that the population of the Madagascan shrimp have significantly reduced due to recent incursions by deep-sea fishermen. This argument is very vague because it does not specify the exact time when the incursions took place.
Significant reduction in the species population is vague because if the incursions took place during the breeding season, the species population would not have reduced drastically.
Due to an increase in the population of the Madagascan shrimp during breeding season the risk of this species being endangered is low. The trend of incursions may not even last for several years as deep-sea fishermen may lose interest in such incursions over the years.
In conclusion, the Madagascan shrimp will not become an endangered species anytime soon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.6327345309 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 11.1786427146 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 13.6137724551 15% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 28.8173652695 14% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 55.5748502994 25% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 672.0 2260.96107784 30% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 123.0 441.139720559 28% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46341463415 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 4.56307096286 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84066948677 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 204.123752495 34% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.468620217663 120% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 705.55239521 29% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3243357413 57.8364921388 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.0 119.503703932 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 23.324526521 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.70786347227 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325005017809 0.218282227539 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167166825231 0.0743258471296 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924735069652 0.0701772020484 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198494142984 0.128457276422 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194539503813 0.0628817314937 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.3799401198 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.3550499002 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.5979740519 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.32208582834 91% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 98.500998004 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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