The media should include more stories which report good news. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that social media should insert more stories about positive news when it is on the air. In my opinion, I agree with the view expressed in the statement.
In information technology social, the propaganda of bad news is becoming popular on several social media and it will cause detrimental effects on communities. On the one hand, some websites always show many pictures of wars which will affect the psycho of pessimistic people, especially children. For example, in 2015, an anonymous YouTube site posted dozen of people's dead photos in civil wars of the Middle East which haunted thousand of people around the world. On the other hand, the number of radio airs or Facebook pages usually release a lot of hate speeches to insult religious and cultural community. From 2014 to 2016, some Facebook owners shared a dozen clips about ISIS, which is a terrorist group in Syria, to attack the Hebrew belief.
Therefore, good news should include in the media instead of pessimistic news. Firstly, positive news always impacts on public morale. For instance, the hope in our society will be strengthened if they know that an innovative breakthrough, in medication, to cure chronic diseases such as cancer. Secondly, optimistic ideals will always give us a warm heart such as blood donation activities saved hundreds of the lives or charities for children in ethnic minorities. In 2017, Vietnam national television gave miracle news that ten people donated enthusiastically their blood to have enough eleven units of blood which saved the life of a pregnant woman when she labored.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the given opinion that more enthusiastic news should be reported on social media.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-01-30 | sepide1367 | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-29 | martinestefan | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-29 | kiana | 61 | view |
| 2020-01-29 | Niusha | 56 | view |
| 2020-01-29 | lydunhien | 61 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13167259786 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68300025978 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633451957295 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7416900813 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.923076923 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242294664369 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889917097081 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107730182193 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174033068638 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779083459612 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.