You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser.
Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter
• expressing your interest in the role
• requesting more information about it
• explaining what experience you have
Dear Sir,
I writing to express my interest in User interface design training programme, which is conducted by you next week. It would be prestigious for me if you provide me a chance to be a part of this event as a organizer.Since the college time I am very good at arranging session and events. I am ensue that my skill on this part will prove helpful for this event.
Further more, I would like to request about the brief information about the course, like what kind of topic, tutorials and discussion we are going to include in this. In addition after knowing the details it would be pretty easier for me to prepare the documentation and thesis
Another important factor is that, this event is also of great importance to me to enhance my skills as i am having 9 years of experience in user interface designing. Therefore my experience on this will be beneficial for providing a better understanding in design. I am so excited to join this programme.
I hope you will consider my recommendation. Eagerly waiting for your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
Dear Sir, I writing to express my interest in User ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... a chance to be a part of this event as a organizer.Since the college time I am v...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Since
... be a part of this event as a organizer.Since the college time I am very good at arra...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'ensued'.
Suggestion: ensued
...d at arranging session and events. I am ensue that my skill on this part will prove h...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ion we are going to include in this. In addition after knowing the details it would be p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this event is also of great impoartance for me to enhance my skills as i am havi...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...artance for me to enhance my skills as i am having 9 years of experience in user...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...experience in user interface designing. Therefore my experience on this will be beneficia...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng for your reply. Yours Sincerely,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81081081081 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92754481208 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627027027027 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.0508696979 44.8134815571 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8888888889 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14576307621 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656351814868 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431393888235 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855788983783 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385938848897 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.