world meat production
This graph indicates the changes in the world meat production from 1950 to 1990. It can be seen from this graph that the world meat production such as the pork, the beef, the bufallo, the poultry, the sheep and the goat.
The graph indicates that the poultry, the sheep and the goat meat are maintain the same level in 1950 which was less than 5 million tons. However, the production of pork and beef and bufallo meat was around 20 million tons. Conversely in 1990 the production of pork, beef, bufallo and poultry was considerable. Between 1950 and 1990 meat production in the world rose signficantly for all kinds except sheep and goat meat which are in same level.
To conclude from this graph we can see that the most meat production is a lot higher in 1990 than in 1950 which are pork, beef, bufallo and poultry except sheep and goat meat.
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that the world meat production such as the pork, the beef, the bufallo, the poultry, the sheep and the goat.
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that the poultry, the sheep and the goat meat are maintain the same level in 1950
that the poultry, the sheep and the goat meat were maintained in the same level in 1950
except sheep and goat meat which are in same level.
except sheep and goat meat which are in the same level.
that the most meat production is a lot higher in 1990 than in 1950
that most meat production in 1990 is much higher than that in 1950
Sentence: Between 1950 and 1990 meat production in the world rose signficantly for all kinds except sheep and goat meat which are in same level.
Error: signficantly Suggestion: significantly
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