The government wants to improve education levels. Which of the following do you think is the best way?
1. hire more teachers to teach in a small class
2. preschool education before kindergarten
3. to provide some training courses so that teachers can be more professional
Human resource is a key factor in a country’s success. In order to improve education levels, from my perspective, to provide some training courses which could heighten teacher’s teaching skills and ability is a good idea compared with the other two since the teacher is the key to education and the plan’s expense is less than the other two.
Human resource is a key factor in a country’s success. In order to improve education levels, from my perspective, to provide some training course which could heighten teacher’s teaching skills and ability is a good idea compared with the other two since an excellent teacher could inspire children’s passion for learning as well as lead a proper direction for the children’s development and the plan’s expense is less than the other two.
It is universally acknowledged that the teacher is the center of education, as well as the crucial channel between students and acknowledge. Therefore, some direct way to provide a training course for the teacher that can improve the teacher’s profession ability is the priority. Just imagine that, if there was a school with the fancy facility and small size of classes, however, there the teacher’s teaching ability was quite mediocre and some even terrible teachers who could not answer the students’ innovation questions and build up a negative example for the students when he/she talks smut. Under the circumstance, would students get interested in learning and would they acquire enough knowledge? I strongly doubted that. Through regular training, teachers would know their disadvantages from the real case study and the debate in the class. During the process of communicating with other teachers, the teacher could also gain others’ experience and wisdom.
Apart from that, compared with hiring more teachers to teach in a small class or to provide preschool education before kindergarten, providing a training course to the teacher is a more expense-friendly initiative. How come? Firstly, hiring more teachers is already a great expense, not to mention more rooms are needed in order to have more small classes. Though training also needs to hire some professional people, the number is much smaller. Secondly, to provide preschool education means that the construction of the school and teacher hiring is needed, which is also a great expense. In contrast, to provide training, the government only needs to hire a place temporarily and invite several professors. It is not exaggerated that the money spent on construction and hiring teachers is far more enough for years of training courses or a more large scale’s training which can benefit more students and teachers.
All in all, to provide training to teachers is not only more effective but also a more expense-friendly way compared with the other two.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, apart from, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2430.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35242290749 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08143088288 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438325991189 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.0 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.8629258941 48.9658058833 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.0 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383831970724 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12591650517 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118316747647 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232857222299 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108537977334 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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