Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today busy world people didn't get much time for their hobbies and if they get few they must enjoy and it should not at the cost of their life.A fair amount of people think that leisure time should be interesting if it contains danger.However I strongly disagree with this statement. Life is precious and one should not risk it for fun sake. In next paragraph firstly I will out line the different activity people tend to have has as hobby. Secondly why some believe it must be difficult.
Every person have different passion and desire for doing thing for enjoyment. For example youth consider activity like mountain climbing, paragliding, under water diving as best leisure time. Reason being more exercise and practice required t to perform these tasks.They risk their life just to feel accomplish and strong and also they have perception that activity like jogging, walking are not fun loving time pass.
On the other hand some people believe that leisure time should be more comfortable like watching movie, listening a good piece of music or even a small chit-chat with friends. for example children from age 10-15 tend to have hobbies like collecting post cards, coins, pencils. And the feel so enjoyable doing such small activities.
To sum up all activities should be fun loving not life threatening.After a leisure time a person should feel more refresh and energetic. Time and life is precious so enjoy each and every moment of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Leisure
leisure time should be interesting and happenin...
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Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...an be enjoyable only if it is difficult.However I strongly disagree that to enjoy your ...
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Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...an be enjoyable only if it is difficult.However I strongly disagree that to enjoy your ...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...should be full enjoyable and risk free. Now a days people have unique kind of hobbies whic...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ife threatning but youth consider these a activity as the best time pass. On t...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Coins
...est some love to even collect postcard. coins etc. To sum up all I would strongl...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ove to even collect postcard. coins etc. To sum up all I would strongly agree wit...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Liesure
...sk just to relize their inner strenght. liesure time should be more enjoyable. As life ...
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... liesure time should be more enjoyable. As life is PRECIOUS THING.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, kind of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82307692308 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47375573888 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657692307692 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2796547776 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173934768448 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523110850269 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610409650207 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978032554959 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398994551867 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.