Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree? ( ielts book 6 test2)

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? ( ielts book 6 test2)

Distinctly, in this era discrimination between male and female has significantly obliterated from the world. Moreover, the modern education sector has no longer male dominated. Therefore, their academic doors are wildly open for brilliant students in all subjects. However, I am completely discorded with the statement. But my personal opinion is that universities should elect students according to their academic working proficiency And, there should be diversity in statistics.

Certainly, today all the male and female students are aggressively taking their optimal subjects such as medicin...

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