While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although, it is thought by many that out of the numerous causes, global warming is the most alarming issue we are facing these days. While others believe that cutting down of the forest on the large number has more hazardous impact on the world over. However, in my opinion, I believed that global warming is contributing more to devastating the earth planet, whereas the deforestation has overall less impact on the world and easily curable.
On the one hand, deforestation is one of the main causes of the pollution in the world because trees purify the atmosphere by absorbing poisonous gases from its surrounding and a major source of oxygen for the human beings. Additionally, the forests stop the flood and anchor the soil thus preventing soil erosion and protect the environment in an iota of ways. For illustration, only 5% of the land in Pakistan is covered with forests and this fact should not be overlooked. While, I think that, in-spite being a major cause, sampling and planting is the easiest solution to extirpate this evil.
On the other hand, many think that global warming is one of the most contentious these days and I agree. Due to heavy industrialization in the cities and suburbs adding up more pollution. Furthermore, due to the burning of the fossil fuels in these industries, the poisonous gases evolved and form a blanket over the atmosphere and thickness of this layer is increasing day by day, which results in the increase of overall temperature of the atmosphere. For instance, the average temperature of the earth is 15C and during 100 years it increased to 16C whereas, the scientists reveal that by the year 2099 it will reach to 20-22C resulting in great devastation of the earth.
In conclusion, people may vary in their opinions, I believed that recent flooding and rise in temperature are because of global warming and we need to think an immediate solution to save our mother planet. While deforestation is kind of a problem which we have a solution in our hand by growing more plants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, thus, whereas, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87031700288 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80230879478 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541786743516 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0734936168 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271573057888 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939589384874 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846299965348 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168377582156 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106897743979 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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