You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-0890C9D2705CB5415D9EFB654E2E9625" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3087" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: start, begin" data-pwa-suggestions="start~begin" data-pwa-dictionary-word="commence" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">commence</pwa> your professional attitude and quality of services offered. Thank you so much not only for making a memorable party but also the photographs; you sent. It brought it back all together so vividly. The party was on the evening of Tuesday 23rd April and organized to celebrate the 90th birthday of my uncle. it was an outdoor function near colourful fountains.
As per the theme, it was a well-planned event, and the decorated stage was drawing people's attention. The main attraction was the 70s Bollywood theme which made this gathering interesting and, so likely by everyone. The singing competition and awarding prizes make it more interactive and fun-loving.
I was a little worried about the arrangements and welcoming the guests; however, your staff turns out to be very courteous, friendly, and very helpful. Aside from that, they let no guest without snacks and cold drinks. Once again, I would like to appreciate your staff and their professionalism.
I look forward to celebrating more parties at your place.
Yours sincerely,
Yogesh Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to
Line 3, column 707, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...elebrate the 90th birthday of my uncle. it was an outdoor function near colourful ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.5641025641 4.54256449028 145% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.68824850164 2.54303337028 302% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.738461538462 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.41237113402 135% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 109.093358857 44.8134815571 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 98.4615384615 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134029603319 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652440252398 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741825641617 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864263153795 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406324318689 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 8.37731958763 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 70.7449484536 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.18 8.71597938144 232% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.