The assigned pie charts compare the participation of boys and girls in cultural and leisure activities.
From the overall analysis, it is crystal clear that majority of boys were interested in playing computer games. Likewise, girls preferred to dance as a cultural activity.
A cursory glance at the given pie charts is adequate enough to see that, computer games took the biggest chunk in terms of leisure activities for boys that is comprising of 34%, which was almost two times as against girls participation. By contrast, the percentage of listening to music for both sexes was similar. Almost a quarter of girls were interested in reading, and the ratio was almost 10 times more than boys. However, dancing represented the second highest share of cultural activity for girls.
Further scrutinising the pie charts, it is immensely clear that, 26% of boys participated in basketball whereas less than a fifth of girls participated in netball. Lastly, the percentage of particp was amounting to 17% and 11%, respectively.
- In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving the existing public transport. Discuss bo 22
- The pie graphs below show the results of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which girls participate. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'comprising' or 'consisting of'?
Suggestion: comprising; consisting of
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...share of cultural activity for girls. Further scrutinising the pie charts, it is imme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, likewise, second, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19277108434 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89778447863 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596385542169 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8890078514 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186015231912 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775350984194 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071499243872 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12648164778 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626514037974 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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