Even though globalization affects the world's economies in very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss
Many developing countries benefited by globalization. Although the world's economy is being increased by the globalization; however affect our surrounding in various ways, such as undermining our culture, customs and food. In this essay I will discuss the both positive and negative sides of globalization.
Firstly, if we look at its positive side, globalization makes life easy of individual and provides a variety of employment options on worldwide. Hence, so many people, nowadays keen interest to shift from one country to another, which provide them facilities according to their qualification as well as skills. Therefore, the developed countries also provide career opportunities to those kinds of people to lucrative economy of their nation.
Secondly, on the other side, with the globalization, the life style of young generation more influenced by this trend. For Instance, in my country India, youngsters like to wear western dresses instead of their ethical wearing. Moreover, they do not like their customs and rituals. Consequently, lots of newly married couples separate from their families. Therefore, the love and respect is totally abolished by the trend globalization. Further, more and more youngsters like to listen to western music, and like fast foods instead of local food. Owing to this, the folk music and the importance of local food are dying.
In conclusion, as every trend has its own advantages, but the disadvantages cannot be neglected. With globalization the economy of every nation improved by adopting the new technology. Still this phenomenon impacts our culture, customs and the flavor of our traditional food.
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...nd the flavor of our traditional food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50980392157 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06736865743 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63137254902 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3711361465 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140799665697 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436083997642 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608336338342 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941477685065 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621893244671 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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