According to some individuals, it is now a popular belief system that we have a variety of activities to choose from. in my opinion, I completely agree that numerous choices are now available to people to select from in terms of transportation, communication and agriculture.
One good example of a way of life made readily available for folks to decide which they desire is transportation. In the past, our forefathers were limited only to the use of legs as their means of movement, but nowadays, there are various ways to move about ranging from land transportation which involves the use of cars, motorcycles, bicycles and even horses. One could opt to travel by air using aeroplane,helicopter, and space aircraft. Some other people explore the sea using flying boat and ships this, bringing about a long range to choose from.
Another area where people have varieties to pick from is the aspect of communication. The use of telephone to speak to someone whether in proximity or far away, mails and video calls. Unlike in the olden days where only letter writing is a way to communicate, for example, a family member may travel a long distance and no one will hear from him until after several months when he writes them a letter.
Finally, people's choice abound from agricultural practice. previously, men were used to one method of farming which takes several months to years to harvest a crop but nowadays, we have genetically modified foods which grow quicker, they can even be genetically altered to become bigger and more delicious. In addition, cross breeding of animals such as lions and dogs to produce a hyper-aggressive dog for security purposes is now in vogue.
In conclusion unlike in the past I totally agree that we now have numerous options of various aspects of life to select from.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 10
- The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. 56
- The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton a neighbouring town since 1962 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , helicopter
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Previously
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95098039216 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96438375041 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2617564459 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.538461538 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101884132273 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419603435764 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430467082891 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677207799506 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352266248265 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.