You missed to attend friends invite. Write a letter to your friend:
apologia for not coming
explain how did you try to contact him/her
what is the alternate plan.
Dear Ram,
I am doing great and hoping you are also sailing in same boat. I am writing this letter to express my sincere apology for not attending your birthday party as I misplaced the invitation you sent to me.
Yesterday, when I was finding something, I found the invite and suddenly realised that I missed the date. I immediately grabbed my cell phone and called you several times but was unable to reach you as your number was out of reach. I also tried to contact your mother as I was having her number but it was not answered. As a result, I finally thought of writing you an apology letter as a hope to reach you.
I know we were planning for so long to have a get together and you will be very excited to know that I am coming to your town next weekend for some urgent work and as I was not able to attend your birthday bash, so, I am planing to meet you and want to apologise in person. I am once again very sorry to not able to attend the party.
I am hoping to see you soon.
Yours truly,
Rupali Mahajn
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g for so long to have a get together and you will be very excited to know that I ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y to not able to attend the party. I am hoping to see you soon. Yours t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20624114729 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5088142393 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268425554996 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106529395327 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608798344541 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159454033905 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379254117935 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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