Some people believe that a college or university education should
be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be
available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree
with? Explain why.
High education is the last step for students to start as a workers, the cost of the resources to give the opportunity to study is very high, some people believe that a college or university education should be available only to good students, others on the contrary think it should be available for everyone, I will explain in the following essay why the second opinion should be more advantageous for society.
Not only good students can be good professionals. Studying is a thing and working in a company is something very different, when people start to work, they have to prove some skills, in the school nobody will teach you to be skilful. In addition to in the school there are a lot of subjects, for example a student who is only good in mathematics can’t arrange the same marks as other students who are good also in languages, but working as a mathematic this student can be the best tool for a company.
Education is a right for everyone why one of the things more important of society should be just for one part of the population. Everyone by law should have access to study, as well as education make people more intelligent, we need smart people who can thing and have their own opinion, likewise the government can’t control us, for examples in countries where people doesn’t have education the state takes advantage of the population.
Be a good student depends of multiple factors, not everyone has enough time to study, similarly a lot of pupils have to work while they are in the university, in addition people can have other responsibilities such as maintain children’s or take care of their parents, this students won’t be as available as people without duties.
To summarize, in my opinion, everyone should have the opportunity to go to University due to the fact that bad students can be excellent workers, as well as, studying is a fundamental right, besides it is not fair than not all people can focus just in study , not everyone can spend the same number of hours studying.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, likewise, second, similarly, so, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79202279202 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81937291545 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.1344086022 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.487265255 48.9658058833 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 210.25 100.406767564 209% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.875 20.6045352989 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.375 5.45110844103 337% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194870661241 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955201324291 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731511539853 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118323459174 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841432373414 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 11.7677419355 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.1575268817 186% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.39 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.0537634409 191% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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