Writing Task 2 (an essay)Some people think that children should learn to paint or draw at school. Others believe it is just a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rt plays significant role in society as a artists can express their ideas or feel...
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...ess their ideas or feeling in their work .Here, certain masses consider that kids ...
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...s their ideas or feeling in their work .Here, certain masses consider that kids ough...
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... are against it and say it is time waste .In this essay .l shall put light on both...
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...re against it and say it is time waste .In this essay .l shall put light on both v...
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... and say it is time waste .In this essay .l shall put light on both views with my ...
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... put light on both views with my opinion . To embark on, t...
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...t light on both views with my opinion . To embark on, there are multiple benefit...
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...re multiple benefits of arts and drawing . First of all ,art create a sense of cre...
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...efits of arts and drawing . First of all ,art create a sense of creativity among t...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...assist the children to do something new.Secondly , this proves more favorable those chil...
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...he children to do something new.Secondly , this proves more favorable those child ...
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Suggestion: this child; those children
...w.Secondly , this proves more favorable those child who cant share own insight and feeling ...
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...s proves more favorable those child who cant share own insight and feeling towards o...
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...e own insight and feeling towards others .But through arts they can easily express...
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Suggestion: But
...own insight and feeling towards others .But through arts they can easily express th...
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...ly express themselves in front of people .for instance, in a painting, artists sho...
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... among the society even in whole world. However, in the contrary side , art is b...
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... However, in the contrary side , art is beneficial for children but we c...
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...en but we cannot ignore others subjects.Teacher should make a balance between all study...
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...ake a balance between all study subjects .In school arts or drawing should be incl...
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...e a balance between all study subjects .In school arts or drawing should be includ...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...achieve success in their academic field.Therefore every subjects have own importance in s...
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...achieve success in their academic field.Therefore every subjects have own importance in s...
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... have own importance in study curriculum . Summarising, art or drawin...
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...ve own importance in study curriculum . Summarising, art or drawing have become ...
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... become fundamental needs of all learner . Its teacher,s responsibility to introdu...
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...ental needs of all learner . Its teacher,s responsibility to introduce children wi...
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... to introduce children with all subjects .I firmly emphasize , learning art or pai...
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...o introduce children with all subjects .I firmly emphasize , learning art or pair...
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...en with all subjects .I firmly emphasize , learning art or pairing is not a waste ...
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Suggestion: to art; to be
...subjects .I firmly emphasize , learning art or pairing is not a waste of time where...
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Suggestion: learned; learnt
...s important skills which kids should be learn at school.
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...s which kids should be learn at school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97046413502 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70152544325 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637130801688 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.206988032 49.4020404114 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.285714286 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8571428571 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2857142857 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235002040482 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102834567865 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820499697906 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235002040482 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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