You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
.describe the problem with the equipment
.explain how this problem is affecting your work
.say what you want the shop
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to complain about the Roswell iron that I bought at XYZ Electronics Limited, which was supplied from Lekki branch to my house on Wilson street, Victoria Island, on the 15th of February.
Sadly, it developed some mechanical faults while I was pressing some garment. Instead of the typical 190°C temperature, it suddenly decreased to 20° C which is ineffective on fabrics. Worst, the steamer started malfunctioning, and therefore, was releasing liquid rather than vapour.
Due to these mechanical issues, I am unable to perform my laundry activities. Unfortunately, there is a continuous delay in the delivery of clothes to customers, as I am now pressing clothes with a low-quality iron. As a result, I am conflicting the standard operating procedure of the occupation, and my valued customers are becoming impatient. If these issues remain unresolved, I would lose my current customers.
In order to avoid this, I will suggest a solution. Since there is a 12-month warranty on the product, and the operational instructions were duly followed, I would like either the money to be refunded or the iron to be replaced. Unless you prefer we remedy the situation with the aid of the police, kindly grant this request as quickly as possible. All relevant documents have been mailed together with the iron.
I am looking forward to your feedback
Yours faithfully,
Thomas Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ational instructions were duly followed, I would like either the money to be ref...
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Line 12, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...followed, I would like either the money to be refunded or the iron to be replace...
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Line 16, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to your feedback Yours faithfully, Thomas Ben
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, well, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19913419913 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99882850386 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675324675325 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.232022033 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3846153846 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10807032734 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345299753359 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441980246763 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534414135088 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372134444403 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 41.2886597938 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.