in spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
why is this the case?
what can be done about this problem?
Nowadays, the modern world is available to supply several species of food for countries. Despite the citizen of the rich countries are no worried about their food supply, some people are still experiencing a hungry living. this essay will discuss the above circumstance and express some measurements to avoid someone dies as no food.
To begin with, it is clearly that the huge expenditure of the food is the mainly reason to cause this issue. Though the food supply of farming is entirely enough for the world, the poverty distance between each country is seriously different. For instance, since the agriculture production in africa is unabundant, the local residents from africa have to buy a food on the market with an extremely high cost, and some of them are not possible to pay for it as the salary in africa is certainly low. Therefore, we can always hear that a death is occurred in africa since the lack of food. Thus, the main cause of this matter is the large poverty difference in some countries.
To settle this problem effectively, we should afford a funding for the poverty countries. An easily settlement is that raising money to the national organizations which aim to aid the dangerous health problem in some poor countries. Furthermore, the local government may raise a budget to struck the price level of food as well as enhance the basic salary of the local employees. As a result, as long as the inhabitants are able to buy the food by themselves, the matter of hungry will be issued.
In conclusion, because of the cost of obtaining food is absolutely high as well as the wage of livers is not enough for living, enhancing the salary and declining the price level of food are the incredible measurements to solve the food problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...local residents from africa have to buy a food on the market with an extremely high co...
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Message: You used an adverb ('easily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('settlement') instead of another adjective.
...rd a funding for the poverty countries. An easily settlement is that raising money to the national o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79276315789 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69771940913 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519736842105 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7313060928 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.076923077 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0950449569231 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419831369343 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326520965521 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588646528855 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368022821154 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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