In some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house?
Rented as well as independent houses have their own pros and cons. This essay will discuss the two reasons, why renting a house is a better choice for an individual as it provides with numerous facilities and care-free maintenance, in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, since the inception of modern architecture, builders are building houses with several amenities. Furthermore, these multistorey buildings have shopping complexes, mini pharmacy, swimming pool, sports court and creshe for working women's babies, so these houses offer something special to people from all age groups to attract them which is the major motive of the owners. Secondly, owners usually appoint specific duties to specific people in these types of accommodation such as maintenance in charge to take care of the maintenance of the building. Tenants can lead a smooth life without any worry, and in case of any issue, they can call person in charge with few clicks on the phone. For instance, according to a survey conducted in 2018 in Bangalore by the Housing association, showed that 70 per cent of youth opted for rented homes rather than buying an own house in past three years.
However, people residing in rented houses can face space constraints. In order to provide many facilities in building which need huge space, architects compromise the design of flats by designing either small kitchens or small living rooms. For example, a report published in the Hindustan Times in 2019 revealed that nowadays only one-eighth of the total area is designated for kitchen in modern homes which is exactly half when compared to past designs.
In conclusion, although rented homes have some demerits such as small kitchens, they render immense benefits to the residents by offering facilities to all family members.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24054982818 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70546054762 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649484536082 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3419840786 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.636363636 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275079511577 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107946728165 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953602249905 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152977147092 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665596173079 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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