Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
In modern society, a majority of young adults tend to bear babies when they grow older. While there are some causes which lead to this tendency, several disadvantages can affect countries.
There are two reasons why people love to begin their parenthood lately. Firstly, young adults want to rank their youth’s years for jobs, and they also like to find more opportunities in careers. In their viewpoints, they only can give a better life for their children if parents have a stable income and enough finance for the family. Secondly, people will have more time to study how to take care of their children and family if they have a baby lately. For example, the research in Vietnam, in 2005, the women aged over 35 knew how to look after babies better than the younger women. Therefore, these babies tend to succeed in their lives in the future.
However, this tendency also has some detrimental effects on communities. On the one hand, women, who pregnant after 40-year-old, will easily have defect children and governments have to spend the amount of money in the nation’s budget to take care of these babies. For instance, in a statistic at Hanoi, the babies will have more than 50% risk to have Down syndrome if their mothers were aged over 40. On the other hand, the distance between the two generations will be separated if people have children later. Therefore, children feel very difficult to share their personal lives with parents.
In conclusion, although more and more people want to begin their parenthood lately, this tendency has several drawbacks to societies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...hare their personal lives with parents. In conclusion, although more and more pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95505617978 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5253668231 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554307116105 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9702751216 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268159669878 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895074500722 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716217475208 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148182635349 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877602329926 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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