Dear Mrs. Valli,
I am writing to request for your reference letter to my new employer. Oracle Corporation, has offered me a job as an Information Developer at their new Research and Development in Bangalore.
As an Information Developer at Oracle, I would be able to pursue my passion for writing as a profession. This is a great opportunity to use my penchant for writing in a technical field. Working in a large multinational company would help me broaden my horizons on working with a cross cultural and diverse team.
As a part of my term assignment in June, 2019, I submitted a paper on "Diversity and Inclusion in a Global Economy". It would be great if you could add references about the assignment and the reasons it was adjourned as the best paper for the term.
Your recommendations about my writing skills would add value to my profile as an Information Developer. I have emailed you the link to my LinkedIn profile where you could add your recommendations.
Looking forward to your response and reference.
Yours faithfully,
Rajie
- Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, 11
- Today, more and more students decide to move to a different country for higher studies.Do you think that the benefits of this outweighs the problems? 61
- You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter - Give details of your study plans - Explain w 81
- You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time.•say how you felt about the visit•refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her•invite your friend to visit you 64
- Today, more and more students decide to move to a different country for higher studies.Do you think that the benefits of this outweighs the problems? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'June 2019'.
Suggestion: June 2019
.... As a part of my term assignment in June, 2019, I submitted a paper on 'Diversity...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05586592179 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25131985549 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581005586592 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0775582087 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2727272727 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209635315941 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810024387706 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636383319679 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11973140013 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053885697733 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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