Today, we live in the computer era; the world has been revolutionized with the advent of computer and technology. Though some people might say that computers have made life more complex and stressful, I'm of the opinion that computers have made life easier and more convenient.
Today, computers are used in every sphere of life; people use computers in offices, teachers use it in schools and colleges, people use even at home. This is because of the plethora of information computers provide us with. Computers help us in knowing what is happening around the world; important news like war or natural catastrophes reach us in a fraction of a second. For instance, today teachers use computers and power point presentations in classes to explain important concepts.
Furthermore, computers have made life easier. Using computers, people can now pay their bills sitting in the comforts of their house and without waiting in long queues. Also, people can check their bank accounts and do online banking anywhere now. Moreover, it has helped people who are either busy to go shopping or people who are confined to their homes to do online shopping through different sites like Amazon, Flipkart etc and buy the things they need without going out or wasting their time.
In addition to this, computers have greatly influenced the field of communications. Communication between people have become a lot faster as well convenient. People can communicate with each other through emails, online chats, voice call and even video calls. Family members who live across the globe can see and talk with each other with great ease like never before. For instance, I do video calls with my parents who live in a different country everyday. This helps them to see and know their grandchildren and enjoy their activities.
In conclusion, computers play a very crucial role in our lives. Though some people might argue that computers have many disadvantages, I believe that the advantages of computers far outweigh their disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...e made life more complex and stressful, Im of the opinion that computers have made...
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Line 6, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heir bank accounts and do online banking anywhere now. Moreover, it has helped p...
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Line 8, column 139, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...between people have become a lot faster as well convenient. People can communicate...
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Line 8, column 449, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...parents who live in a different country everyday. This helps them to see and know their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16060606061 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72791406601 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4912045312 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6111111111 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422402150746 0.236089414692 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138343828002 0.076458572812 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193295445276 0.0737576698707 262% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259481344969 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203846838666 0.0645574589148 316% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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