Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crime of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
By developing cities and extending population, authorizes have special concertation for regulation which has control the violence and criminal in the city. The result of this decision leads to have decreasing violence, organize the society and variety of regulation. In this essay discuss to disagree and agree about this controversial issue.
From 2000 years ago, international societies under a variety of government have been facing many rules which have approved by authorizes, which help to sustain the security in the cities. Moreover observing the law on of crucial duty which people have to act within avoiding the law. For instance, in the third world countries, the crime rate has been decreased by police, which enforces the law in society. In general, it needs to observe that law comes to pretend us of nasty activities.
Some many people from developed country strongly believe that have organized condition for society is a vital factor. It helps to improve the community .however, lack of rules should be done by participating people and governments. To make complete this point, approximately half of 50% of people in China tend to maintain the busy street in rush hour in the capital city.it is essential to say that, if all aspect of law had approved in every country we definitely would have made progress to increase the offensive behavior of people. And being organized have been being famous these days.
Some critics have a focus on the subject that, regulation has been complicated nova days. In the developing country, lack of knowledge about international management of the UN and another country leads to every organization have own rules for themselves. And, following the rules insist other organizations obey general the same structure. Although the regulation requires to reshape gain to enhance time and facilities. To sum up, power is not having the diversity of rules in the world.
In conclusion, individuals and organization under government look should have obeyed the rules for keeping modern society from disorders behavior, however, sometimes in need to decrease object for avoiding complicated law for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'discuss disagreeing'.
Suggestion: discuss disagreeing
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... to sustain the security in the cities. Moreover observing the law on of crucial duty wh...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...actor. It helps to improve the community .however, lack of rules should be done by...
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Message: Did you mean 'reshaping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: reshaping
...cture. Although the regulation requires to reshape gain to enhance time and facilities. To...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... avoiding complicated law for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, third, for instance, in conclusion, in general, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27906976744 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85527866925 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566860465116 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9771261027 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.823529412 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0477092306761 0.236089414692 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0155304767127 0.076458572812 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263974748784 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0283533497519 0.150856017488 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292075944149 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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