Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the reasons people do this? Do you think this a good thing or a bad thing?
One of the resent trends is that people hide their age trying to be perceived as younger person. In this essay, I am going to discuss what the reasons behind it are and why I think that it has both negative as well as positive consequences.
The main reason of trying to look younger is that everyone is bombarded by different advertisements where we can observe perfect people without any flaws. They have perfect bodies, perfect faces, and designer’s clothes. As well as this, plastic surgeries, cosmetic procedures are highly promoted; as a result, modern people become to believe that physical appearance is important and they have to try to diminish age-related changes. From my perspective, it can be considered as disadvantage of latest trend because human beings are generally unsatisfied with their appearance and spend huge amount of money trying to improve themselves. In addition, all these surgeries and procedures are not safe and can be harmful for our health.
Another reason, why looking young is popular because it means that a person has an active life style in spite of their age. For instance, I have met a woman of uncertain age in a fitness club who was able to do program of a dance class among the youngsters completely. Thus, in terms of activity and good health idea to look younger brings some benefits for a whole body and vitality. Personally, I always wanted to look younger and because of it, I try to maintain my weight, have a good sleep and eat healthy food. It goes without saying that along with my young appearance and good shape, I have a good health and lower risk to diabetes, heart attack and other severe diseases.
In conclusion, causes because modern people prefer to look younger are advertisements and desire to live active lives. In my opinion, this notion can be beneficial as well as harmful for a person. It depends on how far their desire to look younger goes. In case of trying to be fit, it have positive outcome, however in case of surgeries and injections it can be dangerous for the health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, thus, well, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79775280899 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70622706758 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5277482945 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264423866717 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855367900103 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550597319381 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172737983381 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467132918996 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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