You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date.
Explain the situation
Expressing your concern
Suggesting a solution
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you that I would not be able to join your organization on November 15th. Please allow me to elaborate on my situation in more detail.
yesterday I received a letter from you that I am supposed to join on 15th of this month. I was interviewed for the post of a technical engineer. As I mentioned in my resume that I am yet to complete my master’s thesis. Now I am done with the thesis and unfortunately, my defence is scheduled on 15th the same date of my joining. I cannot afford to lose this great opportunity but on the other hand, my two-year hard work is on stake. I did my best to complete my master’s program.
I would like to request you that kindly shift the date of joining. I assure you, sir, I will leave no stone unturned in discharging my duties.
Yours Truly,
Maryam Khan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yesterday
...rate on my situation in more detail. yesterday I received a letter from you that I am ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o complete my master's program. I would like to request you that kindly s...
^
Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... that kindly shift the date of joining. I assure you, sir, I will leave no stone ...
^
Line 10, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my duties. Yours Truly, Maryam Khan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 690.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42307692308 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79930840524 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3031210305 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.7272727273 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159699978388 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658350294072 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695912712015 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140330400844 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664213100118 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.