Recent incursions by deep-sea fishermen into the habitat of the Madagascan shrimp have led to a significant reduction in the species population. With the breeding season fast approaching, the number of shrimp should soon begin to increase. Nonetheless, the population should not return to the levels before the fishing boats arrived. Because this trend is expected to continue over the next several years, the Madagascan shrimp will quickly become an endangered species
In the world that we live in, none of us would accept or tolerate other species to disturb our peace, harmony and our lifetsyle. Similarly, ocean has a world within itself. There are way more species in water than there are on the earth. As humans, we should be able to understand how it feels if an intruder arrives on earth and destroys our lives.
Fishermen should watch their paths and make sure that they are not harming the lifstyle of any species. Considering the fact that this particular trend is expected to be followed for the next several years, higher authorities should take a step in order to stop endangering the Madagascan shrimp species.
No doubt, breeding of Shrimps take place quite quickly and the population will incerase again in order to maintain balance. The harm caused by the continuous incursions might result in the annihilation of the Madagascar Shrimps.
Another important aspect to be looked into is the fact that shrimps eat small and unnecassary inssects or waste material that could prove harmful for the humans if not eaten by shrimps. This might seem to be a negligible scenario, but who knows, what might happen if this trend of incursions continue to occur.
There is balance created by the nature which keeps everything in the appropriate proportion. Scientists and knowledgable people acknowledge the fact that the natural balance should not be hampered by the human activities, as this baalnce plays a vital role in fulfilling our needs and desires. Considering the worst case scenario, if shrimp species are endangered, the small and harmful waste material content would increase rapidly in the ocean. This might well result in the contamination of the water which i turn could harm other water species and humans as well. The rate of water usage by humans will eventually make our lives harder and harder.
In a nutshell, it is high time that each and everyone of us start acknowledging the fact that everything created by nature plays an improtant role in maintaing the right balance.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: In the world that we live in, none of us would accept or tolerate other species to disturb our peace, harmony and our lifetsyle.
Error: lifetsyle Suggestion: lifestyle
Sentence: Fishermen should watch their paths and make sure that they are not harming the lifstyle of any species.
Error: lifstyle Suggestion: lifestyle
Sentence: No doubt, breeding of Shrimps take place quite quickly and the population will incerase again in order to maintain balance.
Error: incerase Suggestion: increase
Sentence: Another important aspect to be looked into is the fact that shrimps eat small and unnecassary inssects or waste material that could prove harmful for the humans if not eaten by shrimps.
Error: unnecassary Suggestion: unnecessary
Error: inssects Suggestion: inspects
Sentence: Scientists and knowledgable people acknowledge the fact that the natural balance should not be hampered by the human activities, as this baalnce plays a vital role in fulfilling our needs and desires.
Error: knowledgable Suggestion: knowledgeable
Error: baalnce Suggestion: balance
Sentence: In a nutshell, it is high time that each and everyone of us start acknowledging the fact that everything created by nature plays an improtant role in maintaing the right balance.
Error: improtant Suggestion: important
Error: maintaing Suggestion: maintain
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flaws:
it is out of topic. this is an argument essay, not an issue essay.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 342 350
No. of Characters: 1656 1500
No. of Different Words: 182 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.3 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.842 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.565 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.375 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.313 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.308 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.308 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.077 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 511, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...in the contamination of the water which i turn could harm other water species and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, similarly, well, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 2260.96107784 75% => OK
No of words: 342.0 441.139720559 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95321637427 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63468951965 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 204.123752495 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.468620217663 116% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3043527158 57.8364921388 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.875 119.503703932 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 23.324526521 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.70786347227 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106713265247 0.218282227539 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336547854058 0.0743258471296 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283778130852 0.0701772020484 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547902088624 0.128457276422 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317018436393 0.0628817314937 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.5979740519 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 98.500998004 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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