Most people, recently, have preferred ordering fast food to making homemade food. While there are still drawbacks of this trend, I strongly believe that its values are more significant for many reasons.
On the one hand, the downsides of purchasing ready-made food are various. First, regular consumption of junk food can probably lead to diverse health problems. To elaborate, they contain high levels of preservatives and additives that can cause a plethora of potential serious diseases such as cancer and kidney trouble. Additionally, it is full of calories and deficient in nutrients. If it is consumed on a regular basis, it will result in obesity, diabetes and heart trouble. In addition, it is addictive and will make you need to eat again and again compulsively.
On the other hand, I suppose that the benefits of ready-made food would eclipse those analyzed disadvantages. Initially, it saves a great deal of time. In other words, in most families now both parents work and have no time for cooking food at home or even going shopping for the ingredients needed for making food owing to their hectic schedule. Another significant merit is that it is less expensive than homemade food; doing the shopping for buying vegetables, rice, cheese and other stuff, that are important for cooking, can end your salary, wheras purchasing ready-made food will not cost you that much. These are the reasons why the popularity of quick meals has increased these days.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that the merits of opting for ready-made food including saving time as well as money are more notable than the harm it might cause.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, still, well, while, i suppose, in addition, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02941176471 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6870749845 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7227716534 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128855561791 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370099834028 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288717106411 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683990493528 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341970775598 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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